First Time Final Version...

[claudio]

This is the final version of MY FIRST ANIMATION (using flash). I start using Toonboom and moved for the Flash ( and ever try apply traditional techniques). I know that I have that to improve very, but that is it!

I hope you like it! :rolleyes:

http://www.puppets.oi.com.br



Claudio.
Amazonas, Brasil.

[Animated Ape]

Hi Claudio,

For your first animated short it's quite well done. It is quite long though, and kind of unclear as to what's happening. You should get rid of that gradiant blur thing that you put on. It's distracting, as well as the sound fx for it. The penis isn't moving far enough to need a blur. It would read just fine if you added in some ease-in or an over shoot then settle back. Keep playing around, and you'll start to find out what does and does not work Claudio.

Aloha,
the Ape

[claudio]

I intend to cut some scenes, to be more clearly. Mainly of the song. On blur, I was more for trying(experiment) of that really than to use the speed effect (blur).



Thanks for comment,

Claudio,
Amazonas, BR :D