Nutz Pencil Test

[cordsy]

This is an animated short I am working on call "Nutz". I am trying to do everything traditionally and by myself so any outside perspectives is greatly appreciated.

www.cordsy.clearwire.net/Test.html

it is 1.7mb and in Flash so please be patient.

Thanks,
Cy

[Thunderobot]

i cant see the file.

[cordsy]

Originally Posted by Thunderobot

i cant see the file.

Sorry itchy trigger finger.

[Thunderobot]

nice animated intro .

it looked pretty good with the exception that when he tries to pull the nut it doesnt look realistic.He just kinda pulls it in a very straight line without any curves.I would try not making that particular move so straightforward.

Other than that great job and i wish you luck

[blinkmetoys]

just a little future tip. You shouldnt really put a long intro thing like that at the beginning of a pencil test. There is too much of a gap between watching and rewatching the brief animation.

I think it needs some more anticipation in movement before he reaches and picks up the nut though.

After he picks it up it looks like maybe you have some frames out of order, cus he kinda jumps back and forth.

lookin good. it would really help if i could watch it over and over easier as i mentioned above.